The dazed night falls in
and the music comes on
people get stamped on skin
and the lights turn neon
seductively holding the gaze
invariably ready for a fling
before parting ways
trading the final sting
unable to comprehend now
intoxicated with myths
trying to make meaning, but how
is that possible with copious riffs
slowly gulping down, swaying – unaware and carefree
bitter truth will unfold, when the bottle has emptied thee.
Photo Credits : Weekend
Multiverse 
You have painted this scene well with your words.
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Thanks Sherry 🙂
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“Seductively holding the gaze invariably ready for a fling before parting ways trading the final sting”… you have an unforgettable way with words, Neeraj 😊
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Thanks Sanaa 🙂
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Sometimes in our “longing,” we wish for things that can be hurtful. Something happens and we never look back.
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True Annell, Thanks 🙂
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You have recorded the phase of The Fling really well
Happy Easter Neeraj
much love…
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Thank you Gillena 🙂
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That last sip rips through the chest…
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Thanks Magaly 🙂
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This is a good piece of writing
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Thanks Julian 🙂
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I looked at my hand stamp as I read this. It’s all about the dancing for me!
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😀 Thanks Colleen !
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Love that end…..well written!
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Thanks Donna 🙂
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The idea of being emptied by the bottle instead of the other way round leaves a strong final impression.
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Thank you Rommy 🙂
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Vividly created.
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Thanks Rosemary 🙂
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Your imagery is vivid and puts the reader there with you,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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Thanks Elizabeth 🙂
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yes, when you check the wallet the next day.
nicely done! 🙂
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haha, that’s also one way to look at it 😀 Thanks !
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emptied by the bottle.. something to remember!!!
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Thanks Rajani 🙂
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Yes to be emptied by the bottle… such a strong truth in there
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Thanks Bjorn 🙂
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Of course! Good one!
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Thanks ZQ 🙂
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An eloquently rendered piece, with an intriguing close.
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Thank you Wendy 🙂
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A good write.
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Thanks Ayala 🙂
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